Due:
Change the concrete detail to red/burgundy and her commentary to green. (I started on the first paragraph.)
At the end, comment about how much detail vs. commentary she used, and how her specific detail helps the reader SEE her
Then, return to your essay and make sure you have specific detail. Have your latest draft ready for class
At the end, comment about how much detail vs. commentary she used, and how her specific detail helps the reader SEE her
Then, return to your essay and make sure you have specific detail. Have your latest draft ready for class
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