ECD&I-Gill-2

A reminder that you should: 
1. Have a system/method that makes sense to you
2. Include section titles and information from each section (including the intro)
3. Include color (perhaps as part of your system--ie, red for violence) AND symbols
4. It should make sense and include information that you can explain, but it does NOT need to be "pretty;" these are notes, not a presentation.

Change the concrete detail to red/burgundy and her commentary to green. (I started on the first paragraph.)
At the end, comment about how much detail vs. commentary she used, and how her specific detail helps the reader SEE her
Then, return to your essay and make sure you have specific detail. Have your latest draft ready for class

Read the following from A Different Mirror: 
"Leads a Children's Crusade" P. 121
"Double V for Victory" P. 293

Then, in a document, write about how each defy the "Master Narrative" (page 6 of A Different Mirror) or "Single Story (video)."